Illusion of Happiness
May 4 2008 | Views 106 |
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Searching for you
In mid of all things
Just wondering if all this is a dream
And I wish I don't...
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Opulence,
Thanx for ur comments..Searching for me n myself, my soulmate, my happiness...This poem s actually my search for my happiness n soulmate...Both r very near to me but yet seem to be illusionated n far...
Cheers
Cindrella King
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Whom are you searching for? It doesn’t seem to be an illusion...
A good poem :)
Opulence
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Hi Padmaja,
Thanx for your comments...
Cindrella King
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You have brought out the concept very well with appropriate usage of words like 'spell'. Enjoyed reading, Cindrella King.
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Hi Spk,
Thanx for your comments..,.
Cindrella King
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You are very near to me
Surrounding me with your spell
But still I am not able to reach you
And it makes me feel like I am in hell
nice one.
the last line is an apt ending to this :)
good one.
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Yash ji,
Thanx for your valuable comments
Cindrella King
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It's beautiful!!!
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